"Fifteen minutes until the bus arrives. Then an hour and twenty minutes on the bus. I'm not going to make it. This is bad. This is very bad." He worried to himself.
(Narita Airport: Wikimedia Commons)
Needless to say, the man was stressed. And it didn't help that he had at the bus stop just in time to see an obviously foreign woman struggling to communicate with a taxi driver. The woman seemed to speak a bit of Japanese, but the taxi driver spoke in such a quiet, mumbling voice that it was difficult for even native speakers of the language to understand him. The woman's obvious distress triggered something in the business man. He remembered the times he went abroad and had trouble communicating due to a language barrier. There was nobody there to help him then, and now he was faced with the opportunity to help someone in a way that he had so desperately needed back then.Just as the business man made his way to the foreign woman to help her, he saw his bus pull in to the station. He was torn between the two. Should he catch the bus and ignore the woman, or help the woman and risk missing his bus? He reckoned that because the bus had just arrived, it would sit at the stop for a few minutes waiting for passengers. In the meantime, he would help the woman.
(Taxi in Tokyo: Wikimedia Commons)
"You were very kind and I would like to repay you," she said. "Where are you going? I'll give you money for a taxi."
The business man explained to the foreign woman that he was on his way to a very important business meeting in the heart of Tokyo. They continued to chat and realized they were both going to the same place for the same meeting! They both climbed into the taxi and set off to the city center. The business man was glad that he stopped to help the foreign woman. Not only did he get to help someone in need, but she in turn helped him as well. That day he realized a kindness is never wasted.
Author's Note: This story is based on Aesop's story The Ant and the Dove. I wanted to personify the characters and make the situation seem more realistic (and less life threatening). I haven't had to write stories since middle school so I'm really out of practice! I'm hoping this class will help me figure out how to be more creative with my writing.
The Ant and the Dove by Aesop (2006). Web Source: Project Gutenberg.
You did a great job retelling this story. I love the moral of this story and I think you have a great writing style. I really do love that you used a setting in Japan, I feel like I could visualize myself there at the airport. I like the pictures that you included. I have no idea what taxi's or Japanese airports look like so it was nice to see some current pictures. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteHi Lily!
ReplyDeleteI love that you included your passion for Japan in your story! It lets your self shine through the story plot. I don't know the story of the Ant and the Dove, but I'm sure it followed along very well! I also have not been to Japan and I don't know what it looks like there, and I agree with Laura that I could practically see the airport through the eyes of the business man! It was very impressive, great job!
Hannah
Lily,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job retelling this story! I really like that you modernized it and personified the characters. It is definitely more relatable. I think we have all been in either position, so I really like the moral of this story that no kindness is ever wasted.
Overall, I think you did a really good job!